II. My first paragraph consists of the social capital and benefits gained from joining a fraternity. I tie this into the second paragraph by discussing the academic support and achievement gained from the process as well.
III. I plan on defending hazing and alcohol consumption by using two sources i found. One being that hazing in a sense is a test to see how physically and mentally strong you are. Alcohol consumption being that it is a college experience that should be enacted or lost forever. There are many social implications regarding this as well.
IV. Lastly, I will discuss the various leaders that have benefited greatly, and whom owe much of their success to the support and motivation that the fraternities provide. I still need to find more research on this area.
It sounds like you are focusing too much on the positive elements of fraternity life -- even to the point of defending illegal hazing practices involving alcohol. You need to balance this view -- which verges on propaganda -- with more critical views, or at least take on the critics, who are numerous.
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